Allan Smithee goes first. There should be no comments in this thread other than the verses for each battle. All other comments will be deleted. Particpants have until 5 P.M. on Thursday, Feb. 17th to get both verses in.

I could drop so much Flava it'd make Gloss hate
but I'd rather murk a Hope & Thizzell Dance off stage
...w/ a look on my face like I smelt some piss...
even ask Dids, ya gettin dealt w/ kid
for the hell of it...yea, I'm all up in the tournament
so words all get....prepared & served w/ it
herbs'll get blazed, nerds'll get played
it's hopscotch, stomp on squares, they gettin' laced
w/ the freshness, the clean ish, the brand new, wrapped
new car in a bottle smell, straight off the branch
while your weak shit needin' more max. strength Immodium
AD, so hate me & drop salt like sodium
chloride, I'm so fly, could disappear like Odium
LSC w/ LSD all mixed in the symposium
u nickel baggin? fuck that, I'm pullin' in dimes tonight
& laughin' @ the square like Napolean Dynamite
fool...get ya mind right, like Reaganonmics
'cause dope raps? I post thats, inhalin' chronic...so g'eah.

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I see what you sayin, but I knew I won before I seen it
cause ya couldn't throw up a set if ya ass was a bulimic
blaze ya blunts to get shredded up you just a damn clown
Walk up to grab ya spark just ta

I pity Smithee back with more of the same prentendin

guess my ass is a bulimic cause I'm shittin' on u
not a bitch, it's 3 different bitches bitchin' in u
a tri-polar, pie holder, lyin' more than W.
& my soldiers, high rollers, comin' up from under u (no homo)
one verse from Smithee got him shook...all it took
quit tryin' to flip raps & stick to flippin' comic books
it's the final round and u just struck yourself out twice
Hope one small surgery from bein' a desperate housewife
it's outright insane what I get her to ask me
but u? you's a symp, son....just like Ashlee
& Bart, mayn, this is just the start of my reign
I get stupid, get dumb, get retarted w/ game
yea, I dumbed down to the audience & doubled Grade's props
critisize if u want, but even u say "Real Talk"
& quit bitin' Royce & Pac...I quoted Jay, it's relevant
w/ u there's no point like tryin' to stay celibate
in a world where STD's aren't prevalant, ya better get
out that oil in water steez, u outta' your element
your whole style's open, ya even gape like a bitch
u only live in Florida cause it's shaped like a dick

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voting can start for this now

Hopeless. He took both rounds.

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HARRY GILES HARRY GILES HARRY GILES

you guys gotta be kidding me.

thought smithee's 2nd verse had a few really bright spots that murdered hope

but consistency wins

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HARRY GILES HARRY GILES HARRY GILES

both were hot verses, both are homies. but one of you makes me beats.


vote:Smithee

hrmm, both have their moments, but i'd say hopeless was a little more consistent overall.

vote: hopeless

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My vote goes to Hope


(Please don't fire me, Smithee)

First verse from Smithee was sub-par. Hope produced both rounds.

Yep, definitely Hope on this one.

Smithee came dope the second round, but Hope got it both rounds.

Nothin personal Allan.

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RIP Josh

WESTSIDE!

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if it don't make dollers then it don't make sense!

right now the count is 7-2 hopeless

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HARRY GILES HARRY GILES HARRY GILES

Hope takes this one. If smithee had spent as much time tearing at hopeless as he did bragging on himself he might have won this. That florida line was sick, other than that.. it wasn't much to read.

Vote: Hopeless

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blah

actually fucker it took very little time for me to make a post saying that my raps are better than yours, so slow your roll.



man, what the fuck ever...

anyway, thnx to everyone else who left feedback. I thought my 1st verse was pretty dope, tho. needed more punchlines maybe? :so?:

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lol, the amount of time it took you wasn't in question, however long it took you should have spent the whole time attacking your opponent.. and everyone else agrees that there's was nothing special except for a few lines in the second verse.. don't hate on me because you got merced.. hell don't even count my vote if you think I was hating on you.. you'll lose with or without it

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blah

actually it was...for reference,





ok.


I never said u voted solely to hate on me...but thnx, tho.

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Allan Smithee

unfortunately that is probably a correct assessment. "flow" is something that is overrated in text battles (not to me at all - i try to make my shit flow at all times)...but really, who else but those who actually do flow and rap can appreciate the flow rollin off the tongue when reading it???

the masses want funny/clever lines

feelmenahmsayinyaheard?

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HARRY GILES HARRY GILES HARRY GILES

HopeLess

The numchucks in the locker line did it for me.

yea, iknawdidyatalkinbout.

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but broncstale would've voted for me, right? :mrgreen:

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one verse from Smithee got him shook...all it took
quit tryin' to flip raps & stick to flippin' comic books
it's the final round and u just struck yourself out twice
Hope one small surgery from bein' a desperate housewife

^^

liked that.

not that it matters, but i'll go with smithee. didn't really expect much out of him (admittedly, this is the first thing i've read from him though), and i thought hope would kill it, and to me, he came up a little short of expectations...